Project #1 Worksheet
Barrett is
ASU’s reward for students who saw remarkable academic achievement in high school.
Everything about it is superior to any other dorm. Each student is given their
own room which is shared with a suitemate. The dining hall is employed with “culinary
artists” that supply a great variety and quality meals. The architecture is
completely unique in relation to the other dorms. The list goes on and on and
each luxurious feature contributes to the intended function of rewarding ASU’s
warriors of academia.
The
exterior of Barrett is eccentric. With its Hogwarts-esque reputation and towering
presence, it exudes confidence. On the contrary, the dormitory halls are
serene; not a sound to be heard, and rooms specialized for a perfect study
environment litter the floors.
With so
much mystique and wonder surrounding the facility, it’s hard to pick up the
white noise that I’m looking for. The one thing my head keeps coming back to is
balance. Going back to my reference of the difference in the tone given off by
the exterior and interior, I feel like this dorm emits a suggestion of balance. This suggestion begs for your recognition.
The
facilities are named after Craig and Barbara Barrett, who provided a twelve
million dollar endowment to ASU. In return, ASU named their honors school after
them. Barbara received her doctorate from ASU and they are both involved in the
Thunderbird Global Business program headquartered in Glendale.
The extent
of my research did not offer anything that would lead me to believe Barrett has
served any other purpose/s in its existence. I am forced to assume that it has
always been ASU’s academic flagship program.
There is an
overwhelming custom of modesty here. Everything is done in moderation. Even the
various groups of students smoking hookah tobacco keep the noise down to make
sure that they don’t distract or annoy anyone in their vicinity. Inside the
residence halls, everyone honors the assigned quiet hours and the few rooms I’ve
been inside have always been tidy.
Technically,
everyone has access to the general area inside the walls because the walkway
called “Paseo del Saber” is completely open and leads to the field that I’ve
been examining. A Sun Card assigned to a Barrett resident is required to get
into the residence halls though.
Arizona
State University.
The cost to
build the actual buildings is unbeknownst to me, but I’m sure it is seven
figures. Other than providing a home for students, it’s hard to tell what other
sentimental value it has. I would think it differs between each individual.
The website
does a wonderful job of informing a prospective student/parent of every aspect
of the Barrett experience. From the facility to the faculty, the site that lies
within ASU’s all-encompassing webpage is a great reference for any graduating
high school senior. The only feature it fails to entail is the design and some
less factual, more abstract information like the minute details I have been
scouring for.
In no way,
shape or form is this a place in a phase of shift. Barrett is solid in a
literal and symbolic meaning of the word. In unison with the five story
fortress walls, the gates leading in to the castle are surprisingly heavy.
There is
absolutely no tension here. It is a completely calm, passive habitat.
The origin
roots back to the substantial endowment fund given to ASU by the Barrett’s.
Evidence of this origin lies in a grey, marble slab that reads ‘Craig and
Barbara Barrett Honors College’ in the field adjacent to the dining hall.
The most
obvious answer to me is it’s superiority over the other dorms on campus. I
realize that I’ve touched on that multiple times but it is simply resounding.
It’s presence is a living deity in its self.
If I'm not being entirely off base, haven't I asked myself enough questions? That is, in addition to the questions that you've asked me...
To be
honest, this is a question that I’m going to have to think about on a different
level, which will require more time. Without question, I will include this
thought process as a part of my completed draft.
A good
amount of the above questions caused me to do some in-depth research and I plan
on applying that data to my examinations when they are poignant.
An interesting
angle. Rather than trying to
tell readers everything about the place, what angle(s) might you use?
I’m
considering using Mark Twain’s method of micro-level detail, but in addition,
using raw, infantile depictions do create contrast in my writing.
A firsthand
account. Did you interact with
people in the place or participate in some way?
What experiences did you have there that you can write about using
“I”? (Yes, first person point of view is
encouraged, especially for this paper.)
I did not
interact with anyone (interviews, activities,etc.), but I did look at the
things going on around me and imagine how I would feel if I was a part of them.
Generating Ideas and
Text (taken from the Norton Field Guide (Goggin and Bullock) Chapter 16, pages
168-169)
I found it
interesting because so much of it is mysterious. Immediately after stepping
foot inside the gate, it’s noticeably quieter than the outside area. It’s
almost as if the very air that surrounds the place is sound proofed.
I’m curious
to know how social the residence halls are. For instance, in the hall that I
live in in the Adelphi Commons II, I spend a lot of time with my suitemate but
outside of that I’ve honestly only spent time with two other people. I’m
inclined to find out how far the reach of their dorm social network extends.
Their website is http://barretthonors.asu.edu/ and I
could easily call the main office at 480-965-4033.
Analyze your findings. What patterns, images, or recurring ideas or phrases did you use to describe your place? What contrasts or discrepancies do you see?
Balance,
serenity, mystery, superiority, confidence, modesty. The only real contrast is
the clash of the exorbitant exterior appearance with the secure, reassuring
confines of the residence halls.
I think using Twain’s technique of testing the limits of what detail is will make for a connection with the audience and I can only hope my writing has the flow required to accomplish the task. Movng on, I’m truly interested to see if my skill is adept to utilize a style of such a beloved and acclaimed author.
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